Under the Weather

Curled upon the bed,Seeing visions upside down
Oh how this weather keeps me bound
Tired and achy is how my body feels
Sipping on freshly made tea
With lemon chunks and onion peels
Stuffy nose and watery eyes
I'm feeling worse as time goes by
With a high fever and sweaty feet 
And a nauseous stomach I just can't eat
Congested  I am, No one understands
At least in this way, Feeling blue....  I am today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Atanacio Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 10:26 AM
see--you should be all better now-- another day :)
Mason Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 4:13 PM
Love your version of not feeling well here, Tyesha! Love the sweaty feet ... smile ... don't know about the lemon & onion peels but heah, if it works ... right on!! If this is for real hope you're feeling better soon!!
Winter Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Aww, feel better soon, poor thing. Love, Shar
Rhinem Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 2:58 AM
Frown~"Hello Again Gifted, Precious & Lovely-Hearted Tyesha!!!"~Well, I am very sorry to hear that You are somewhat ill it seems at this moment!? Definately could be soo much better to say the least!! You know, I hardly ever get sick/colds?! But when I do~I find taking about three to four thousand milligrams of vitamin C at once and lots of water help greatly!!!? Hope You Healthy Soon Dear Tyesha~Love Always To You & Your Loves, John!!!~Bye Dear:):)
Ginn Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 9:32 PM
Aww poor baby I've wondered where you've been babycakes. Do you really put onion in tea? oy. Hope you feel better soon
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