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UNDER the UMBRELLA

raindrops and raincoat delightful sound of praying with lips whispering city under umbrella and the whole world in His hands

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2023 6:31:00 PM

'The Return of the Tanka Queen,' Kim Rodrigues! The last two lines are an expansive canvass, ever-stretching-outward, surrounding that city under the umbrella. Brilliant! :) Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 7:00:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon! May you and yours be under the shadow of His wings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2023 3:38:00 AM

- Lovely written, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 8:06:00 AM

Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2023 1:35:00 AM

God is our umbrella. Pray not for wind though. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 8:06:00 AM

Oh how you hate the wind, dear Victor!

Paige Hind

Date: 11/12/2023 1:10:00 PM

I love the rain. This is beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 8:05:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/12/2023 10:27:00 AM

Indeed, the whole world is "in His hands." I have a card at my desk with two penguins facing each other. The penguin on the right has a huge, orange fish on his head. The penguin on the left says: "Relax, God's in charge!" As I watch our world spin in chaos, I find great comfort in the wisdom of that card! Thank you for this beautiful reminder that God never lets go! Gratitude to you for this tanka. Blessings of autumn joy to you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 8:04:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your touching thoughts!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2023 10:17:00 AM

The last line was so great with the tone of your tanka. Very nice, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2023 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Jude Herrick

Date: 11/11/2023 5:23:00 PM

Awesome poem

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2023 10:18:00 AM

Thanks, Jude!