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UNDER the UMBRELLA

raindrops and raincoat
delightful sound of praying
with lips whispering
city under umbrella
and the whole world in His hands

prayerraintanka

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Gershon Wolf

November 13, 2023 at 6:31 PM

'The Return of the Tanka Queen,' Kim Rodrigues! The last two lines are an expansive canvass, ever-stretching-outward, surrounding that city under the umbrella. Brilliant! :) Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 7:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon! May you and yours be under the shadow of His wings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 13, 2023 at 3:38 AM

- Lovely written, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 8:06 AM

Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim

Victor Buhagiar

November 13, 2023 at 1:35 AM

God is our umbrella. Pray not for wind though. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 8:06 AM

Oh how you hate the wind, dear Victor!

Paige Hind

November 12, 2023 at 1:10 PM

I love the rain. This is beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 8:05 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Sam Kauffman

November 12, 2023 at 10:27 AM

Indeed, the whole world is "in His hands." I have a card at my desk with two penguins facing each other. The penguin on the right has a huge, orange fish on his head. The penguin on the left says: "Relax, God's in charge!" As I watch our world spin in chaos, I find great comfort in the wisdom of that card! Thank you for this beautiful reminder that God never lets go! Gratitude to you for this tanka. Blessings of autumn joy to you!

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 8:04 AM

Thank you for sharing your touching thoughts!