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Under the Surface

The world daily sees our face, but only the one we choose. Under its surface lurk many more. Emotions a plenty hidden away beneath the one we show to all, many are the ripples on its surface. This mask we show to all smiling, keeping eighty per cent hidden. True emotions kept locked up. What is it we fear? Apathy? Disgust? Betrayal? or Pain? Yet under the surface we are safe! Distrust leads to our hidden face. A fear of not being accepted if we show what is under the Surface. Not always has it been this way. Life's trials have brought it about. Yet! Nature herself lives on the surface!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 3:41:00 PM

oh a great thought, nature herself does it! Yes, we all wear masks. Can you imagine what I am masking with some of these students I have to put up with? hahaha. The ones on cell phones are making my anger almost boil to the surface!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/27/2014 1:28:00 PM

what a beautiful thought "nature herself lives on the surface" how true. we need to learn from her mother nature i mean. great write i think.

Elaine George

Date: 8/27/2014 2:23:00 AM

This mask we choose to wear, is woven with every thread of negativity day to day life spins. Great writing, Shadow. Lainie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 8:31:00 PM

Hello Shadow, I know exactly what you are talking about. I only show the surface, others want to see. However, sometimes it's hard to hide the emotional mask. I like, how you took, this and showed that even nature, has a surface, staring right at us... Enjoyed..LINDA