Under the Sun

under the sun
with a buttered bun
a butterfly
flies by
now I'm alone
but a ginger scone
and ginger tea
and me
now tea and scone
are gone
all done
and I'm alone
under the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 9:51 AM
This is a lively scene. You obviously have won against temptation. I'd be searching for another scone. They are so good.
Crandall Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 10:54 AM
If you think I've won, see my latest poem - "You're Invited" - lol
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