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This poem belongs to all the children who will never know the joy
of running on a beach and getting sand between their toes. Told
from the perspective of a 12-year-old boy, wheelchair-bound.

I know a place where the stars kiss the sea;
and fish sing all night in cool harmony.
Where golden crystals, sparkling in the sand
are polished each night by a wizard's hand.

Added to that are bright amethyst gems
from the cache of sunset wandering in. 
A magical place where one can pretend
those broken, like me, are able to mend.

I found I could run at last--on fire!
So fast a comet might even admire.
I tumbled and cartwheeled all over sand;
then shook a magician's vanishing hand.

I whirled with delight, so eager to go
to all those places intriguing me so
defying gravity, I jumped so high,
I touched the edge of the deep purple sky.

Catching a ride from a planet to star
I could glimpse them all, both near and far.
No stopping me now, I joyfully thought.
A passing moonbeam next I caught,

that took me farther, a more distant place,
where stars shake hands and then embrace
I spoke with Zeus as his wife, Hera, smiled;
even spoke with Ares, their wayward child.

They said I must heed Earth's beckoning call;
because i'm not one of them, after all.
Suddenly captured by a downward draft,
starting to tumble, I could hear Zeus laugh.

As I tumbled down, the breeze gently placed
me in my wheelchair--my usual space.
But now that I know special secrets of
a magical land so far above.

I'll travel where my arms can at last lift
a flower I find on a sandy drift. 
Where I can jump and dance and run--
and all things are possible under the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/28/2021 2:34:00 AM
Stunning ....Beautiful Poetical ...A truly amazing gentle creative soul, you are xxx love Daisy xxx
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/30/2021 8:30:00 AM
Dear Daisy, Just now finding your lovely message. Thank you so much for your much-needed thoughts. love, Ann
Date: 10/12/2021 4:35:00 PM
A child can dream in a wheelchair. I love those places you go and the cartwheeling all over the sand!
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/12/2021 9:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. This poem wrote itself.
Date: 10/12/2021 7:15:00 AM
This poem is truly wonderful, magical, inspirational it took me for a ride and I was able to survey the planets and the stars too. You are truly gifted, light is the air and captivating as the breeze.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/12/2021 9:33:00 PM
Oh Jo, Your comments are so kind! Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing this poem.
Date: 10/11/2021 8:26:00 PM
Excellent. You've got it going on. Keep it up. Beau travail.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/12/2021 9:30:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging words! I am enjoying the voyage with Poetry Soup!
Date: 4/26/2021 11:17:00 AM
This is a special piece, I so enjoyed reading it. Blessings Richard.
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/29/2021 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. Probably more for young children, but definitely for those in wheelchairs.
Date: 4/6/2021 7:54:00 PM
Oh I absolutely love this. A truly magical journey. Another fav for me. Keep them coming Ann. :-)
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/29/2021 4:33:00 PM
Dear Anne, you are so kind to read and like my poetry! I appreciate you so much!
Date: 4/3/2021 8:02:00 PM
Love to go back to one's first post, Ann this is truly a remarkable poem, just got to go my favourites. A poem of mine with the same sentiments 'I Wanna be Free' please take a look when time.
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Date: 3/10/2021 10:00:00 AM
Just came across your poems Ann and this first one you put in the Soup is absolutely wonderful, love the content and the flow. Belle
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Date: 2/3/2021 12:39:00 PM
Yes, anything is possible under the sun. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. This is beautiful, magical and tender- all at the same time. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/23/2021 10:41:00 AM
Brandy, such a sweet message. Thank you. And thanks for the welcome!
Date: 2/3/2021 11:22:00 AM
Wow, Ann, thank you for taking me on this magical journey, this is so beautifully written. Welcome to Poetry Soup, for your first post, this is a gem. I look forward to reading more of your work. John
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Date: 2/7/2021 2:33:00 PM
You are so encouraging, John. I will read your work as soon as I get a few poems posted.
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