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Under the Summit

Now that,

Under age's snow-covered summit 

I stand,

Just 

Under eternity's demarcation line,

I still hope, 

A few snowflakes of wisdom to harvest

Before 

The moment, my soul's soaring comes,

Obeying

To the Lord's celestial command!




(C) Demetrios Trifiatis
   05 October 2015

ageheavenwisdomfree verse

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Eve Roper

October 5, 2015 at 4:56 PM

Wonderful write once again. .

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 6, 2015 at 5:41 AM

Thank you my sweet and loyal friend! God bless you!

Njeri Hunjeri

October 5, 2015 at 4:51 PM

Definitely great. I love the poem from the title to the !. Very wise words indeed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 6, 2015 at 5:40 AM

Thank you, njery, it's a delight to receive your visit and comment again! Bless you!

Bl Devnath

October 5, 2015 at 1:45 PM

Excellent feeling filled with great wisdom. 7 sure, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 6, 2015 at 5:30 AM

So good to receive you visit and precious comment, dear BLD. Thank you!

Miraj Raha

October 5, 2015 at 9:53 AM

"Lord's celestial command!" wow this line got me,another excellent poem for our loving god.You are at your best Sir.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 6, 2015 at 5:34 AM

As you already know, it is only when we pay attention to God within we are we to hear the whisper of HIS voice! Thank you my good friend, Miraj, for your wonderful visit and comment!

Michael Tor

October 5, 2015 at 5:14 AM

Inspiring and beautiful Demetrios. Another of your dedicated writes to our Lord. Honoring him. Appreciating and glorifying him. You please him my brother. He smiles when he looks at you. Your heart reveals all of your love for him and your actions are noted not just your words. Have a blessed day. He resides in you my brother and your poems are a reflection of Jesus.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 6, 2015 at 5:37 AM

Michael, my friend, your comment a celestial symphony! I am humbled by your words. All of us are loved and sanctified by Him. The problem is that some of us accept not HIS blessings! Thank you and God bless your kind heart!

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