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Under the Summit

Now that,

Under age's snow-covered summit 

I stand,

Just 

Under eternity's demarcation line,

I still hope, 

A few snowflakes of wisdom to harvest

Before 

The moment, my soul's soaring comes,

Obeying

To the Lord's celestial command!




(C) Demetrios Trifiatis
   05 October 2015

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Eve Roper Date: 10/5/2015 4:56:00 PM Wonderful write once again. . Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/6/2015 5:41:00 AM Thank you my sweet and loyal friend! God bless you!

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 10/5/2015 4:51:00 PM Definitely great. I love the poem from the title to the !. Very wise words indeed. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/6/2015 5:40:00 AM Thank you, njery, it's a delight to receive your visit and comment again! Bless you!

Bl Devnath Date: 10/5/2015 1:45:00 PM Excellent feeling filled with great wisdom. 7 sure, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/6/2015 5:30:00 AM So good to receive you visit and precious comment, dear BLD. Thank you!

Miraj Raha Date: 10/5/2015 9:53:00 AM "Lord's celestial command!" wow this line got me,another excellent poem for our loving god.You are at your best Sir. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/6/2015 5:34:00 AM As you already know, it is only when we pay attention to God within we are we to hear the whisper of HIS voice! Thank you my good friend, Miraj, for your wonderful visit and comment!

Michael Tor Date: 10/5/2015 5:14:00 AM Inspiring and beautiful Demetrios. Another of your dedicated writes to our Lord. Honoring him. Appreciating and glorifying him. You please him my brother. He smiles when he looks at you. Your heart reveals all of your love for him and your actions are noted not just your words. Have a blessed day. He resides in you my brother and your poems are a reflection of Jesus. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/6/2015 5:37:00 AM Michael, my friend, your comment a celestial symphony! I am humbled by your words. All of us are loved and sanctified by Him. The problem is that some of us accept not HIS blessings! Thank you and God bless your kind heart!