Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Monorhyme

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Under the Spell

All of you is more than enough for me to woo
Kids in the nest waiting and I have things to do
Let me go, it’s enough and keep it for night to coo.
I am under your spell and can’t say no to you.

Crave my heart and it’s bleeding only for you
My every need and thirst you satisfy is true
Take care what you ask me let’s not overdo.
I am under your spell and can’t say no to you

Never enough, it’s never enough ever anew
My love for none, one more time all I ask you
Need one more as I am under your spell too
You’re under my spell and can’t say no to do.. 

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April 17, 2014
Form: Monorhyme
Dr. Ram Mehta
Second Place win
Contest: Men Only by Kelly Deschler

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Ray Dillard April 24, 2014 at 12:25 PM Doc, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on this deserving write. RAY

Paul Callus April 24, 2014 at 12:08 PM A worthy winner with a worthy write. Saying 'no' is not always that easy to say! congrats. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 11:56 AM Lovely write sir..:) 2nd stanza mmmmn :) , Congratulations :)!,olive

Joseph May April 24, 2014 at 11:09 AM Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Richard Lamoureux April 24, 2014 at 8:45 AM A passionate piece Dr. Ram. Congratulations.

Cole Banner April 24, 2014 at 7:10 AM Great work...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 1:38 AM Lovely write n a great win Dr Ram ,,, always wonderful to read ,,,, congrats ,,,/Upma/

Poet Destroyer A April 23, 2014 at 11:41 PM nice win Dr Ram...Linda

Robin Davis April 23, 2014 at 10:57 PM Dr. Ram A unique and interesting write. Congrats on your win. Thank you for the great comment on my Mind Tricks poem.

Kelly Deschler April 23, 2014 at 10:15 PM A very passionate write, Dr. Ram. You made great use of the monorhyme form with this poem. Congrats on your win in my contest! Dr.Ram Mehta April 24, 2014 at 8:17 AM Thanks for the appreciation, kelly

Toquyen Harrell April 17, 2014 at 9:24 AM Lol, a funny one!