Under the Red Umbrella

UNDER THE RED UMBRELLA 

Under the red umbrella, sheltered in our rainy day nest,
my coal black heel lifts — our oneness beats in my chest.
Handsome in his dark suit, like an iron I press close —
my full-bodied lips a crimson shade, now our his, I suppose.

He calls me his wild Paris rose on these streets of shimmering gold.
The blush rushes to my cheeks and eyes — to him I’m sold.
Between the french kisses...ooh la la...we make lover’s jokes.
The circus tent of our wide-brimmed umbrella drips and soaks.

His fingers, like rain, touch my face, lift my chin, make me see him.
In turn my eyes dive into his, our green and blues take a swim,
turning teal as we ponder marriage with a family, life and love.
Vulnerable, I feel my nakedness as I remove my black silk gloves.

Under this unforgettable crimson cloud, we no longer hide,
except from the prying eyes of Paris la ville des lumières pride
My red dress clings, its waist slim, its curves vivacious — not shy.
Together two orphans stay dry — our passionate fire will not die.

11/3/2018
The Red Umbrella Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Eve Roper

Paris la ville des lumières - Pa ree la veel day loo me air - Paris the city of lights
(Approximate pronunciation, apologies to the French)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/19/2018 6:10:00 PM
Such lovely romantic imagery in your wonderful poem, Kim. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra!
Date: 11/17/2018 1:08:00 PM
Very romantic Kim, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 11/14/2018 11:47:00 AM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2018 3:13:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/13/2018 11:10:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, kim Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 11/3/2018 9:44:00 AM
Seen some gems for this contest Kim and this is another. I like how you picked up on her raising her heel. Good luck. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 11/3/2018 9:09:00 AM
- Oooh la la ... Kim :) - Romantic and lovely under this umbrella ... - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! Hugs...Kim
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