Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Under the Radar

Beneath the dark blue veil
Of a moonless midnight
Under the radar
Without a bleep

A camouflaged whisper
Mystifies and mortifies
In a most roundabout
Conniving way

A shiver shudders
A murderous mystery
Not leaving a hint or clue



AP: 2nd place 2020

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Elaine Perrin October 12, 2019 at 10:28 AM Atmospheric and creepy, I love it! :-) x Line Gauthier October 12, 2019 at 6:49 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Elaine.

Hello There October 11, 2019 at 1:13 AM This is so creepy, I hardly want to stay!! Yikes!! Awesome write, Line ~ I'm out!! Line Gauthier October 11, 2019 at 9:17 AM LOL - getting into the Halloween spirit... or watching too many CSI episodes.

Richard Lamoureux October 10, 2019 at 2:52 PM The aliens are coming! Line Gauthier October 10, 2019 at 4:09 PM Aww is that what it is? LOL

Jennifer Proxenos October 10, 2019 at 2:01 PM Scary and mysterious Line, leaves the reader in suspense! Hugs, Jennifer. Line Gauthier October 10, 2019 at 4:09 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.

Chris Green October 10, 2019 at 10:42 AM Kind of creepy my friend. Paints a scene of a misty eve filled with shadows and sounds that make the pulse race. Nicely done Line Line Gauthier October 10, 2019 at 12:00 PM LOL well... Halloween is around the corner. Thanks for your visit and comment, Chris.

Mystic Rose Rose October 10, 2019 at 4:59 AM Nothing greater then getting involved in a murder mystery as long as your the one reading about it, of course. Nice poem dear friend, sending you health wishes, xo Line Gauthier October 10, 2019 at 8:27 AM LOL thanks, Pixie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Timothy Mcguire October 10, 2019 at 12:33 AM Dreamy and spooky, I like it! Line Gauthier October 10, 2019 at 12:37 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf October 9, 2019 at 11:49 PM The setting's picture penned perfectly, Line. I can hear the whisper, feel the shudder, and now the goosebumps on my arms stand as testimony to your craftmanship. Bravo, Gershon Line Gauthier October 10, 2019 at 12:27 AM LOL I hope you don't lose any sleep tonight, Gershon.