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Under the Radar

Beneath the dark blue veil Of a moonless midnight Under the radar Without a bleep A camouflaged whisper Mystifies and mortifies In a most roundabout Conniving way A shiver shudders A murderous mystery Not leaving a hint or clue AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted on October 9, 2019

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/12/2019 10:28:00 AM

Atmospheric and creepy, I love it! :-) x

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/12/2019 6:49:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Elaine.

Hello There

Date: 10/11/2019 1:13:00 AM

This is so creepy, I hardly want to stay!! Yikes!! Awesome write, Line ~ I'm out!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/11/2019 9:17:00 AM

LOL - getting into the Halloween spirit... or watching too many CSI episodes.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/10/2019 2:52:00 PM

The aliens are coming!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2019 4:09:00 PM

Aww is that what it is? LOL

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/10/2019 2:01:00 PM

Scary and mysterious Line, leaves the reader in suspense! Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2019 4:09:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2019 10:42:00 AM

Kind of creepy my friend. Paints a scene of a misty eve filled with shadows and sounds that make the pulse race. Nicely done Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2019 12:00:00 PM

LOL well... Halloween is around the corner. Thanks for your visit and comment, Chris.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/10/2019 4:59:00 AM

Nothing greater then getting involved in a murder mystery as long as your the one reading about it, of course. Nice poem dear friend, sending you health wishes, xo

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2019 8:27:00 AM

LOL thanks, Pixie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/10/2019 12:33:00 AM

Dreamy and spooky, I like it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2019 12:37:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/9/2019 11:49:00 PM

The setting's picture penned perfectly, Line. I can hear the whisper, feel the shudder, and now the goosebumps on my arms stand as testimony to your craftmanship. Bravo, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2019 12:27:00 AM

LOL I hope you don't lose any sleep tonight, Gershon.