Under the Parasol

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Summer blazed high as the sun reached its peak.
Her rosy red cheeks were truly unique.

I fell in step as we reached the beach
She changed in a bikini, I was bereft of speech.

I suggested a powerful sun lotion to screen the rays.
She could be sore for days and days.

How enchanting to see her frolic among the waves!
Or swim powerfully towards the dark caves.

We kissed ardently, no one could see.
How elated I felt and how free.

Back at the beach we dressed and walked in the shade
Under the parasol for all to see, our promises were made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/13/2021 6:40:00 PM
Dear Victor, adoration and love is beautifully expressed with youthful vigor and passion. Romance is ever so seductive under the parasol. Simply splendid, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/22/2021 6:29:00 AM
Lovely Victor. So beautifully described with great imagery. Loved the pic. As always a fine write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/21/2021 7:02:00 PM
That’s beautiful and passionately romantic in lovely memories of your love… Belle
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Date: 11/21/2021 11:13:00 AM
that sounds like an amazing summer romantic day!!
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Date: 11/21/2021 5:26:00 AM
Love it!
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Date: 11/21/2021 2:16:00 AM
Romance at its best..Delice
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Date: 11/20/2021 9:08:00 PM
Very romantic, Victor, you have not lost your touch.
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Date: 11/20/2021 2:53:00 PM
Ahhh!! How romantic and passionate a work. Your visits to my page are always encouraging. Sara
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Date: 11/20/2021 1:29:00 PM
A sweet love song in the heat of the sun? Beautiful Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 11/20/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hi Victor, You painted such a lovely and romantic picture with words. Good content and imagery. Well done. Have a good day and weekend my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/20/2021 5:57:00 AM
A vibrant and upbeat poem, Victor, It's brimming with the enthusiasm of passion. Joyous Thanksgiving.
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Date: 11/20/2021 5:00:00 AM
A happy summery poem, Victor:)
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Date: 11/19/2021 10:51:00 PM
A spirited and and happy poem, filled with the exuberance of romance. Happy Thanksgiving. Evelyn
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Date: 11/19/2021 10:12:00 PM
Hello Victor ... romance as it should be - well done Victor - Lindsay
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Date: 11/19/2021 7:10:00 PM
How cute!!! Enjoyed this sweet romantic write ...
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Date: 11/19/2021 9:57:00 AM
Oh Victor, you are such a romantic.... I love this....the imagery, the warmth and the love! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/19/2021 9:04:00 AM
Very warm poem on a cold day, Victor. I like your rhyme.
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Date: 11/19/2021 8:16:00 AM
A delightful story scene, Victor. Strong rhyming and imagery.. very sensual! Love this one, Blessings and inspirations to you! sally
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Date: 11/19/2021 7:29:00 AM
Change your name to Victor the Romantic!
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Date: 11/19/2021 5:54:00 AM
Sweet and tender like love--enjoyed the ride with you on the beach. Delightfully romantic write, Victor.
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Date: 11/19/2021 5:36:00 AM
Very romantic day at the beach Victor, summer can't come quick enough. Tom
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Date: 11/19/2021 4:48:00 AM
Love your romantic side dear Victor, a beautiful poem that touches the heart, have a great day :)
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Date: 11/19/2021 4:29:00 AM
An cool meandering along the beach side and a lovely moment shared under the parasol.... ! An enchanting poem of joyful romance !
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Date: 11/19/2021 2:49:00 AM
Lovely write. So sweet and intimate... touching. God bless you, Victor, with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 11/19/2021 1:33:00 AM
Ho, absolutely love this Victor, takes me back into an elegant time.
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