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Under the Parasol

Summer blazed high as the sun reached its peak.
Her rosy red cheeks were truly unique.

I fell in step as we reached the beach
She changed in a bikini, I was bereft of speech.

I suggested a powerful sun lotion to screen the rays.
She could be sore for days and days.

How enchanting to see her frolic among the waves!
Or swim powerfully towards the dark caves.

We kissed ardently, no one could see.
How elated I felt and how free.

Back at the beach we dressed and walked in the shade
Under the parasol for all to see, our promises were made.
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Ashley Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Dear Victor, adoration and love is beautifully expressed with youthful vigor and passion. Romance is ever so seductive under the parasol. Simply splendid, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ball Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Lovely Victor. So beautifully described with great imagery. Loved the pic. As always a fine write. God Bless, JB
Edmonds  Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 7:02 PM
That’s beautiful and passionately romantic in lovely memories of your love… Belle
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:13 AM
that sounds like an amazing summer romantic day!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Love it!
Skelly Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 2:16 AM
Romance at its best..Delice
Roper Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Very romantic, Victor, you have not lost your touch.
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Ahhh!! How romantic and passionate a work. Your visits to my page are always encouraging. Sara
Gilmour Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 1:29 PM
A sweet love song in the heat of the sun? Beautiful Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Y. Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Hi Victor, You painted such a lovely and romantic picture with words. Good content and imagery. Well done. Have a good day and weekend my friend:-) Alexis
Poet Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 5:57 AM
A vibrant and upbeat poem, Victor, It's brimming with the enthusiasm of passion. Joyous Thanksgiving.
Daniel Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 5:00 AM
A happy summery poem, Victor:)
Buehler Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 10:51 PM
A spirited and and happy poem, filled with the exuberance of romance. Happy Thanksgiving. Evelyn
Laurie Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 10:12 PM
Hello Victor ... romance as it should be - well done Victor - Lindsay
Kannan Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 7:10 PM
How cute!!! Enjoyed this sweet romantic write ...
Calasibetta Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Oh Victor, you are such a romantic.... I love this....the imagery, the warmth and the love! Blessings, Paulette
Bayles Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Very warm poem on a cold day, Victor. I like your rhyme.
Eslinger Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:16 AM
A delightful story scene, Victor. Strong rhyming and imagery.. very sensual! Love this one, Blessings and inspirations to you! sally
Seeker Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Change your name to Victor the Romantic!
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 5:54 AM
Sweet and tender like love--enjoyed the ride with you on the beach. Delightfully romantic write, Victor.
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November 19, 2021 at 5:36 AM
Very romantic day at the beach Victor, summer can't come quick enough. Tom
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Love your romantic side dear Victor, a beautiful poem that touches the heart, have a great day :)
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 4:29 AM
An cool meandering along the beach side and a lovely moment shared under the parasol.... ! An enchanting poem of joyful romance !
Mcintosh Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:49 AM
Lovely write. So sweet and intimate... touching. God bless you, Victor, with love and prayers, Gina
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November 19, 2021 at 1:33 AM
Ho, absolutely love this Victor, takes me back into an elegant time.
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