Arabian Poet Poet Curtal Sonnet

Under the Palm Tree

sitting in the shade of a palm tree 
came here seeking for answers 
from modern cities,I flee 
to the bosom of my ancestors  
up to the blue bed,rising my dusted eye 
on the horizon to the west 
to the shining sun where it lie 
knights on horseback,rising dust 
 hunting for phantoms so thirsty 
for life battles will last 
want nothing less than victory 
everything is passing by me so fast 
sands tickling my face,whispering "hey"
  wake up it is end of the day

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Skat A July 26, 2015 at 12:04 AM ARABIAN:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~ Arabian Poet July 27, 2015 at 1:53 PM Thanks so much for being always here for us dear Skat A

Daver Austin July 21, 2015 at 3:43 PM I like the idea here. What better place to dream and meditate than under a palm tree. Maybe get a wake up call. Congrats on the selection. daver Arabian Poet July 22, 2015 at 3:12 AM I actually wrote it under a palm tree Thanks dear Daver

Arabian Poet June 25, 2015 at 9:54 AM Really thanks to all of you for your support and encouragement . I am really honored for knowing you all especially Peter thanks man and God bless you all

Richard Lamoureux June 20, 2015 at 11:29 PM I have enjoyed reading your poetry this evening. Welcome to the soup my new friend. Arabian Poet June 21, 2015 at 12:23 AM it is my honor you did . And thanks again

Poet Destroyer A June 17, 2015 at 4:09 PM Mofeed, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Arabian Poet June 17, 2015 at 6:52 PM Most thanks to you for this warm welcoming and I look forward to it dear friend Linda

Afolabi Muideen June 16, 2015 at 9:29 AM Excellent write Mofeed you painted this very beautiful and welcome to soup...God bless......A.M. Arabian Poet June 16, 2015 at 12:35 PM Thanks for encouraging me and for welcoming me here God bless you too

Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2015 at 4:37 AM - Welcome to P Soup, Mofeed ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :) Arabian Poet June 16, 2015 at 12:37 PM Thanks for your warm welcome

Skat A June 15, 2015 at 7:14 PM Mofeed, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Arabian Poet June 15, 2015 at 8:45 PM Dear SKAT A, I really thank you for your sweet welcoming and these sweet words. And it is my honor to be a friend of yours .