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Verse/under the old maples/Human Written
Copyright Protected, 04-1818-528-25-2026
All Rights, Constance La France
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Penned, April 25, 2026
For the International Contest, #1466
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 04/26/2026

"BEAUTFUL"

under the old maples



it was raining today but I still went for a walk
suddenly the wind took my hair blowing it all about
           but it felt 
                        sublime and
                                       divine
as I strolled beneath majestic old maple trees
                   their leaves came  t
                                                   u
                                                     m
                                                        b
                                                          l
                                                            i
                                                             n
                                                               g    down on me
red, burnt orange and yellow falling, swirling, twirling
                                 it was a perfect moment in time, so
 I gathered many to press within the pages of my books
                                           but sadly, they crumbled in my hands
so, I let them  f l u t t e r   away . . .
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M  Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Love this poem Constance….l really ‘understand ’ that perfect moment….old large Maple trees are gorgeous and walking in the rain is an awakening delight! Debx
La France Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 1:14 AM
Deb, thank you for the compliment ad comment ~
Alhemaidy Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 4:48 PM
Very nice! Good luck with my best warmest sweetest wishes :-)
La France Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 4:54 PM
AA, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, blessings ~
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