Under the Introvert Sun

Your loosened hair 
Gleaming in the benign sun
Roses in our blood inhale dense air
Decking up before departure has begun 
The green is paling one by one

It's the dance of death in colour 
A fountain of farewell with a hue
For the cracking bones of October 
Palliating painters seated in queue
Picasso brown red and blue

The message on the train  is as clear as an apple
Our hues are too fleeting to hold
Come let's dance dear before yellowing begins in maple
Before our roots get too old
Under the introverted autumn sun let's melt our gold

October 20, 2020
Autumn Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Francine Roberts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 1:22 AM
WoW! This a magnificently crafted poem, Probir. The mixture of colors as metaphor was expressed beautifully by you. Hope all is well with you, dear friend. Love and peace always.
Ashley Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Dear Probir, the sweet beauty of emotions, spectacular imagery and metaphors takes my breath away. Every line displays brilliant artistry that captures my imagination and heart, especially the last three lines. I love Autumn in all “hues too fleeting to hold” and I love your poem! A fav!! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan
Gupta Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 9:31 PM
Thank you so much, Susan ... as always, this time too, you are the fountain lavishing splashes ... I am honored, my dear friend ...
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace