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Under the cloud

Gather all around It's been a while And I am glad That you all came Three is not a crowd When you are under the cloud The music flows into your soul As we pass around the bowl Eat and drink all you want It get's happier than happy hour When you are under the cloud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/29/2011 9:33:00 PM
Very nicely done! I like your style! Always, Laura
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Date: 12/21/2011 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest Maina. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2011 7:54:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Maina. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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