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Under the Bare Soles

whether you'll write just one address on the road never guessed. When would it raises sharp pointed exactly on bare soles this was still yesterday we stand in the midst of the fire you ignite. Your anger so that wouldn't leave the rest when the morning we completed let's play at the end of the ragged childhood. Running into the sky cracks and this mouth you brought couldn't told a thing as a mark it should has removed when we were stuck in the road number that never was let's make a night the orange before you pull me from the calendar numbers embark on a journey of the same which always ends up being the carcass in an ambush pointy under bare soles

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Date: 12/1/2012 7:57:00 AM
Such maturity of write and thought SO pleased to read and enjoy your write! fav line [let's play at the end of the ragged childhood. Running into the sky cracks] Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help or information it would be my pleasure to aid you. I am running a Contest now for 6 lines of verse on the topic light..please do enter. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:56:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Yunizar. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2012 1:12:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..Sara
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Yunizar Nassyam
Date: 11/28/2012 9:53:00 AM
thanks, Sara

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