Under Silver Lining Wolf Whistles

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i wrote this in three different clouds formed in 9 syllable counts 

so in its cotton form it shows a state of grace 

three is the reverence on a triple formation 

born under its beam 

Dance of the wolf licking wounds touch 
looking into her cold lunar face 
chanting spirits under a full beam
Pearl fangs showing canine howls outwards 
defending rights held for a taste of 
Natures promise crowned brave soul beating 
underneath a circle of white snow 
bouncing echoes take away the air
inside a lonely space howling back  

Hope your clouds upon a breath escape 
softly one dove lands cushioned gently 
catcher within this breathless moment 
feathers fly singing to a flower 
to warm the bones of darkness away 
Night eyes strongly binding steel cuts grey 
Forged under the smoke signals burn
warm driven deep breaths exhale outward
Chanting in the land of the brave ghosts 

Escaping from out of forever 
circling shape shifting winds expose dust 
shadows moving voices encircling 
mother earth you gather your harvest 
strange murmurs from your heart born free love 
Distant memories lovingly prowl 
under the sky unveils what one fears 
destroying everything beautiful 
in the end we all weep inside hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/23/2017 9:49:00 PM
Powerful last two lines of the first verse. Love the piece Liam, thank you...
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:34:00 PM
Very pooooooooowerful poem my friend. You do deep, dark poetry so very well...
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:45:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:44:00 PM
- Liam - A feeling of sadness, reality circle ... the face of the truth ... in the shape of a ghost - A beauty that ends in hell - But, as always great written :) - Best wishes and warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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