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Under My Duvet

This dude over here, posts four lims a day Five lines each makes a twenty line buffet Writing them is a breeze They flow out with ease All cozied up under my flowered duvet

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/28/2017 8:34:00 AM

Quite the feast, that twenty line spread//Ever been to Vegas, where buffets are fed?//To the masses//lined up fatasses//pleasantly pigging, soon to be dead. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2017 8:39:00 AM

And GOOD MORNING TO YOU SIR JOHN JOHN!!! Is the sun peeking over the hills yet? So feast on this twenty liner! LOL UP AND ATTIM!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/28/2017 7:39:00 AM

You doth smack a smile on my face plumed man!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2017 7:42:00 AM

Not too hard I hope!!! LOL You is my friend Miss Mo... love, Jackson xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/28/2017 7:28:00 AM

Yes, you do seem to have fun writing these limericks my friend! I enjoy reading them in the mornings! This one is a lot of fun, wondrously awesome! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2017 7:34:00 AM

AGAIN, it is a joy to read your encouraging comments! Have a fantastic day, Russell !!!