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Under Morning Sky

Under morning sky. Gentle breeze waft against spring leaves. Adding to bird songs. The ear interprets mysteries.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 4:40:00 AM
nice
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Date: 4/27/2012 8:45:00 PM
The title drew me in, the content made me see, hear and feel by way of though in the picture that you drew. You fed my mind and finished with a posed question leaving me wondering about the mysteries therefore wanting for more. Sounds like a winning formula to me. Huggs on a good write. TLee
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Date: 4/24/2012 12:30:00 PM
Way to capture the senses my friend. You touched on visuals, tactile feelings (the breeze), and auditory. You also stayed true to the form as well. Great poetry, thanks for sharing.
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