Under Morning Sky

nice

The title drew me in, the content made me see, hear and feel by way of though in the picture that you drew. You fed my mind and finished with a posed question leaving me wondering about the mysteries therefore wanting for more. Sounds like a winning formula to me. Huggs on a good write. TLee

Way to capture the senses my friend. You touched on visuals, tactile feelings (the breeze), and auditory. You also stayed true to the form as well. Great poetry, thanks for sharing.