Under Love's Spell

It's seven here, yet there it's still five, she'll be getting off work about now. And my old computer whirls to life, it's the best my budget will allow. The screen bleeps as I check my email, my heart pounding, eager for our date. But I'm early; she's not online yet, so I log onto Skype and wait. My mind wanders back to our first chat when the wee hours melted into dawn. For, with cramped fingers and sleepy eyes, we failed to notice time rolling on. Ever since then, we talk every night, though thousands of miles divide our hearts. And I can't wait to see her again, when she smiles, my loneliness departs. I'm jarred by her message "Hi Babe," her romantic greeting transforms me. And instantly, we're under love's spell, as the miles dissolve to set us free. (Quatrain) 4/25/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:00 PM
very modern with the Scype! Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Williams Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Sparks fly across the Cyber Space -Very romantic this long distance relationship. Beautifully expressed Emile.7
Pinet Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Thanks so much Maria, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
Coreggia Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 2:21 PM
This poem reads almost like a page taken from a journal and we can't help but ask what happens next? It's beautifully expressed Emile. You can make a relationship come to life in just a few lines:) Amitiés
Pinet Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Marie, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
Haight Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Beautifully written and so uplifting, Emile. Love conquers time and distance as it can fly across the miles! 7 Sandra
Pinet Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Thanks Sandra, your comments are truly appreciated, Emile.
Vaso Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 10:38 PM
You have melted me with this, when hearts meet, there is no distance nor time to separate them!
Pinet Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Thank you so much Arthur, your comments are much appreciated, Emile.
Chircop Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 2:05 PM
This transmits a beautiful feeling and reveals the power of long distance relationships..It shows that were is love...Its always possible..and the miles are only one minute away.Awesome:)
Pinet Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
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April 25, 2017 at 11:43 AM
This made me smile Emile, wonderful write! 7 xomo
Pinet Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Thanks Maureen, if it brought you a smile, it makes me happy, Emile.
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