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Under Love's Spell

It's seven here, yet there it's still five, she'll be getting off work about now. And my old computer whirls to life, it's the best my budget will allow. The screen bleeps as I check my email, my heart pounding, eager for our date. But I'm early; she's not online yet, so I log onto Skype and wait. My mind wanders back to our first chat when the wee hours melted into dawn. For, with cramped fingers and sleepy eyes, we failed to notice time rolling on. Ever since then, we talk every night, though thousands of miles divide our hearts. And I can't wait to see her again, when she smiles, my loneliness departs. I'm jarred by her message "Hi Babe," her romantic greeting transforms me. And instantly, we're under love's spell, as the miles dissolve to set us free. (Quatrain) 4/25/2017

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:00:00 PM
very modern with the Scype! Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/27/2017 8:30:00 AM
Sparks fly across the Cyber Space -Very romantic this long distance relationship. Beautifully expressed Emile.7
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Date: 4/27/2017 10:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Maria, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:21:00 PM
This poem reads almost like a page taken from a journal and we can't help but ask what happens next? It's beautifully expressed Emile. You can make a relationship come to life in just a few lines:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/26/2017 6:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Marie, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
Date: 4/26/2017 8:06:00 AM
Beautifully written and so uplifting, Emile. Love conquers time and distance as it can fly across the miles! 7 Sandra
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/26/2017 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, your comments are truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2017 10:38:00 PM
You have melted me with this, when hearts meet, there is no distance nor time to separate them!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/26/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Arthur, your comments are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2017 2:05:00 PM
This transmits a beautiful feeling and reveals the power of long distance relationships..It shows that were is love...Its always possible..and the miles are only one minute away.Awesome:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/25/2017 3:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2017 11:43:00 AM
This made me smile Emile, wonderful write! 7 xomo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/25/2017 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, if it brought you a smile, it makes me happy, Emile.

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