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Under Everything

the fear of death is
the undeniable primal
roar under everything

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/12/2018 3:58:00 PM
Potent and wise penning :) xomo
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/12/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen but it isn't my wisdom. It's just so. The way it is, sometimes someone simply stumbles across what everyone else is thinking. You're so kind, glad you got something from it.
Date: 7/10/2018 10:24:00 PM
Deep and true Haiku!
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Date: 7/10/2018 5:12:00 PM
For sure. But maybe it’s supposed to be that way...to scare us into thought.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/10/2018 7:01:00 PM
Novel idea Kim. There might be a poem prompt in there somewhere. Thanks for the comment. Poets, aren't they they the best?
Date: 7/10/2018 3:02:00 PM
Very well said. Primal and fear are great choices for the image you've created dwelling under everything.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/10/2018 6:58:00 PM
Truth. Ain't it a kick? Thanks for the comment.