Under Everything

the fear of death is the undeniable primal roar under everything

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/12/2018 3:58:00 PM

Potent and wise penning :) xomo

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/12/2018 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Maureen but it isn't my wisdom. It's just so. The way it is, sometimes someone simply stumbles across what everyone else is thinking. You're so kind, glad you got something from it.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/10/2018 10:24:00 PM

Deep and true Haiku!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/10/2018 5:12:00 PM

For sure. But maybe it’s supposed to be that way...to scare us into thought.

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/10/2018 7:01:00 PM

Novel idea Kim. There might be a poem prompt in there somewhere. Thanks for the comment. Poets, aren't they they the best?

Tikar Osuru

Date: 7/10/2018 3:02:00 PM

Very well said. Primal and fear are great choices for the image you've created dwelling under everything.

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/10/2018 6:58:00 PM

Truth. Ain't it a kick? Thanks for the comment.