Under Everything

the fear of death is
the undeniable primal
roar under everything
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Potent and wise penning :) xomo
Gaul Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Thank you so much Maureen but it isn't my wisdom. It's just so. The way it is, sometimes someone simply stumbles across what everyone else is thinking. You're so kind, glad you got something from it.
Man Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Deep and true Haiku!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 5:12 PM
For sure. But maybe it’s supposed to be that way...to scare us into thought.
Gaul Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Novel idea Kim. There might be a poem prompt in there somewhere. Thanks for the comment. Poets, aren't they they the best?
Osuru Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Very well said. Primal and fear are great choices for the image you've created dwelling under everything.
Gaul Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Truth. Ain't it a kick? Thanks for the comment.
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