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Under Dissipated Clouds

Calm after the storm Bare branches tell a story Inundated lives... for Raul Moreno's Contest: Tranquility

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2010 11:41:00 AM

excellent,what a wonderful write,..p.d.

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/23/2010 8:20:00 PM

a true beauty and much more,,Congratulations and Thank you for visiting my words,,,Blessings...Cecil

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this awesome Haiku Iolanda. Agape, Moses

Chris Bowen

Date: 4/18/2010 7:45:00 AM

i really like this.ive been dealing with leaves and trees alot in my poetry lately too.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/18/2010 6:14:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this Haiku, Iolanda! Especially the second line. And congrats of your win! Although for some people Haiku , Senryu and Tanka seem "simple", they are showing petry in its purest form! Tanky you also for your comments and gave a great time...Gert

John Freeman

Date: 4/17/2010 9:48:00 PM

Good ideal here Iolanda. I took a look at the picture, and had an ideal or two, but didn't enter anything. Thank your for youyr comment today, Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/17/2010 6:26:00 PM

enjoyed--

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/17/2010 5:22:00 PM

very nice--must be a winner!!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/17/2010 3:00:00 PM

Thank you for your warm comments on "Yearning" glad you like! I sent you a SM & comments a while back but heard nothing back fromyou...Hugs, Jimmy

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/17/2010 2:03:00 PM

Congratulatons on your win in the contest! Great imagery here, Iolanda! Enjoy! Peace, love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/17/2010 1:49:00 PM

Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. amazing words for the photo and a special win for u my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2010 12:24:00 PM

This describes the photo so beautifully!! Congratulations on your well-deserved 2nd place, Iolanda! ~ Love, Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/17/2010 11:55:00 AM

Iolanda, congratulation in placing 2nd in my contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2010 10:57:00 AM

Very good interpretation. That picture was just too difficult for me! Luv, andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/17/2010 6:25:00 AM

Lovely captured situation after a storm, Iolanda! Wishing you good luck with this beautiful Haiku for Rauls contest!..And thank you for your comment! Have a nice weekend...Gert

Susan Palli

Date: 4/17/2010 1:19:00 AM

Coming from New Orleans,I can relate to that