Under Disbelief

Under a rainbow lies darkness… Below the colors, spilled forgiveness… A bird in a box whose wings are silenced… Etched on a wall is pure defiance… Innocence invaded by fear and disbelief… A torn smile uncovers grief… Squinting eyes slowly close and sleep… As tears dry and darkness creeps…
inspired by the movie "The Raven"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/6/2013 9:37:00 AM
Michael... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 10/2/2013 7:44:00 PM
really nice poem,congrats on your poem being featured,Ivy
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Date: 10/2/2013 6:52:00 PM
excellent poem, congrats on having your poem featured...haven't seen you around here, hope all is good...
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Date: 2/27/2013 12:44:00 PM
Reading it here ... once again finding shivers !! Such a good write !!
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Date: 2/26/2013 12:22:00 PM
You've captured the movie so vividly with your words, Michael! Awesome! Exceptional writing, my friend. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/26/2013 7:28:00 AM
Michael, a beauty, well done, constance
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Date: 2/24/2013 8:43:00 AM
LIke Gail says this is a powerful image. I am trying to remember this movie. It seems there have been been more than one Raven movies. But of course, they would all be dark! I like this one, Michael. So nice to hear from you. BTW, you should go see that new movie, dark skies. Talk about dark!!!
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Date: 2/24/2013 8:08:00 AM
Wow, you sure do know how to write a special write my friend! This is a masterful poem, quite an enlightening piece, Great Work!!
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