Kale Brereton Poet Free verse

Under Control

We live in a society 
that teaches us to control 
all the things we can’t,
and accept no control of the things we can,
namely,
Ourselves,
and our destiny

Kale Brereton
Jan 13/19

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Valerie Staton January 14, 2019 at 3:59 AM NICELY WRITTEN! Kale Brereton January 14, 2019 at 5:33 AM Thank you Valerie!

Mahtab Bangalee January 13, 2019 at 11:35 PM so have to learn control own-self at first Kale Brereton January 14, 2019 at 5:33 AM I'm of the belief that the only thing we can truly control is ourselves. Thank you for the comment Mahtab!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 13, 2019 at 11:07 PM Sharp ink!! Well done. Kale Brereton January 14, 2019 at 5:31 AM Thank you Maureen!