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Under Control

Welcome to the world of the Net
Schools are closed, pupils in bed
We move on for progress
We obtain a total mess
Everything under control : a mouse and a headset.

2017

addictioninternettechnologylimerick

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Sara Kendrick

April 17, 2019 at 6:34 AM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading it today. Sometimes it is very stressful to be on the net. I appreciate the kind reviews on my work. Sara

Besma Riabi Dziri

April 17, 2019 at 4:05 PM

A pleasure to read your poetry, Sara.. deeply humbled by your honourable visit and genuine feedback. Thank you so much. My best wishes and blessings.

Paul Callus

July 9, 2018 at 3:23 PM

Technology is a good servant but a cruel master, Besma! As you wisely point out, controlling it is not easy, but we cannot afford to be enslaved by it. ~ Best regards & blessings. // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 10, 2018 at 10:53 AM

Absolutely Paul, unfortunately for us! Thank you so much Paul for honouring me with your visit and with your generous feedback. Do have my respect. Stay safe and blessed always.

Al Juman

June 16, 2018 at 10:58 PM

I like that ---exellent

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 18, 2018 at 3:35 PM

Thank you so much. My pleasure.

Silent One

June 14, 2018 at 12:16 PM

the net is a dark and dangerous place Besma... If it is not controlled, we could lose intelligence of humans... Great limerick...

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 18, 2018 at 3:35 PM

Indeed, we are all under its spell! We must always be vigilant! Thank you so much Silent One for your supportive and elating feedback. Stay safe.

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2018 at 9:01 AM

I guess it saves on paper. Myself I appreciate the tactile experience of books. This piece causes one to teeter between two worlds of thought. Thanks for your visit to my latest piece.

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 9, 2018 at 9:09 AM

My pleasure! Thank you so much for your interesting feedback.

Harry Horsman

June 8, 2018 at 6:09 AM

I use it and hate it, its the manipulation i hate most of all, thanks for writing this Besma, love the poem..

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 8, 2018 at 9:08 AM

We use it to keep up to date with what is going around us! We hate it because we are getting more and more addicted to it. Thank you so much Harry for your visit and intersting comment! My pleasure. Stay safe.

Faraz Ajmal

June 8, 2018 at 5:40 AM

Yeah you are absolutely right, internet has made a significant change in every aspect of our lives, gladly in Pakistan, although it s boring but still we use paper and pen to write, my cousin who lives in America told me that in America they have an Ipad to do take notes and study, even sometime they study online, wierd but at the same time interesting as well, but it has benefits as well, it s our choice to use it for our benefit or for destruction, good luck

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 8, 2018 at 9:04 AM

"Technology a blessing in disguise"! You have the choice! Books are precious and good to touch and read! Technology can be a blessing! Thank you so much Faraz for your insight and generous feedback. So much elated by your visits. Stay safe.