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Under Control

Welcome to the world of the Net Schools are closed, pupils in bed We move on for progress We obtain a total mess Everything under control : a mouse and a headset. 2017

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2019 6:34:00 AM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading it today. Sometimes it is very stressful to be on the net. I appreciate the kind reviews on my work. Sara

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/17/2019 4:05:00 PM

A pleasure to read your poetry, Sara.. deeply humbled by your honourable visit and genuine feedback. Thank you so much. My best wishes and blessings.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/9/2018 3:23:00 PM

Technology is a good servant but a cruel master, Besma! As you wisely point out, controlling it is not easy, but we cannot afford to be enslaved by it. ~ Best regards & blessings. // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/10/2018 10:53:00 AM

Absolutely Paul, unfortunately for us! Thank you so much Paul for honouring me with your visit and with your generous feedback. Do have my respect. Stay safe and blessed always.

Al Juman

Date: 6/16/2018 10:58:00 PM

I like that ---exellent

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/18/2018 3:35:00 PM

Thank you so much. My pleasure.

Silent One

Date: 6/14/2018 12:16:00 PM

the net is a dark and dangerous place Besma... If it is not controlled, we could lose intelligence of humans... Great limerick...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/18/2018 3:35:00 PM

Indeed, we are all under its spell! We must always be vigilant! Thank you so much Silent One for your supportive and elating feedback. Stay safe.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/9/2018 9:01:00 AM

I guess it saves on paper. Myself I appreciate the tactile experience of books. This piece causes one to teeter between two worlds of thought. Thanks for your visit to my latest piece.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/9/2018 9:09:00 AM

My pleasure! Thank you so much for your interesting feedback.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/8/2018 6:09:00 AM

I use it and hate it, its the manipulation i hate most of all, thanks for writing this Besma, love the poem..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/8/2018 9:08:00 AM

We use it to keep up to date with what is going around us! We hate it because we are getting more and more addicted to it. Thank you so much Harry for your visit and intersting comment! My pleasure. Stay safe.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/8/2018 5:40:00 AM

Yeah you are absolutely right, internet has made a significant change in every aspect of our lives, gladly in Pakistan, although it s boring but still we use paper and pen to write, my cousin who lives in America told me that in America they have an Ipad to do take notes and study, even sometime they study online, wierd but at the same time interesting as well, but it has benefits as well, it s our choice to use it for our benefit or for destruction, good luck

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/8/2018 9:04:00 AM

"Technology a blessing in disguise"! You have the choice! Books are precious and good to touch and read! Technology can be a blessing! Thank you so much Faraz for your insight and generous feedback. So much elated by your visits. Stay safe.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/8/2018 5:37:00 AM

Most likely that's the future... even now...All the best Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/8/2018 8:58:00 AM

Unfortunately for those who use the gadgets and surf the net in a harmful way! Thank you so much Arturo for your genuine feedback. Stay blessed.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/8/2018 5:14:00 AM

interesting write!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/8/2018 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. My pleasure!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2018 3:44:00 AM

But I think children become antisocial and spend their lives in a virtual world. They find it hard to interact with others. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/8/2018 8:45:00 AM

That's my point.. Every thing is actually out of control! Thank you so much Tom for your intersting feedback. Stay blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/8/2018 3:16:00 AM

How true! A great message concerning the future of education. Absolutely spot on dearest, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/8/2018 8:42:00 AM

A debatable issue that of Education! The future of generations to come! Thank you so much dear Demetrios for your lovely feedback. Stay blessed.