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Under Construction

I am in this world But, I am not of this world I walk beside you But I am not your friend You greet me warmly But, you never let me belong I am just a creature In the oasis of fairytales I am as disenchanted with you As you are with me But, you need me And I need you It’s a destructive cycle I am a creature In this oasis of fairytales I hear the thunder Within my soul But, I cannot dance There’s one you see Who holds the key And she’ll never let me out I am a creature In this oasis of fairytales U N D E R C O N S T R U C T I O N

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/11/2011 2:10:00 PM
Very creative..Glad that I stopped by..Congratulations on going through the first round..Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Courtney. Love Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Courtney on "Under Construction" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:40:00 AM
Very...Creative Poetry Thank you....
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:42:00 PM
Congrats on the selection. Yep! This is life. Dave
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:55:00 PM
This is lovely Courtney, yet so sad and profound. enjoyed reading. Harry
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Date: 7/19/2010 12:15:00 PM
Ps. ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening, 'Precious Courtney Dyer,'" Bye Dear!:) ~
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Date: 7/19/2010 12:12:00 PM
Smile ~ "O'," I knew an oasis once; tucked away amid the recesses along the Northern California coast....Well, they thought that they were within an oasis? Smile, yet, their so called castle, came up for inspections one day and, a revamping and remodeling became The Order...."From Darkened Grim to 'Brilliant Bright;' A True Fairytales, 'Once Upon A Time;' Love Always," John!:) ~
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