Under Construction

I am in this world
But, I am not of this world
I walk beside you
But I am not your friend
You greet me warmly
But, you never let me belong
I am just a creature
In the oasis of fairytales

I am as disenchanted with you
As you are with me
But, you need me
And I need you
It’s a destructive cycle
I am a creature
In this oasis of fairytales

I hear the thunder
Within my soul
But, I cannot dance
There’s one you see
Who holds the key
And she’ll never let me out
I am a creature
In this oasis of fairytales



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Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Very creative..Glad that I stopped by..Congratulations on going through the first round..Sara
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Courtney. Love Carol
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February 5, 2011 at 6:57 PM
Congratulations Courtney on "Under Construction" being featured. Vince
Konos Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Very...Creative Poetry Thank you....
Austin Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Congrats on the selection. Yep! This is life. Dave
Horsman Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:55 PM
This is lovely Courtney, yet so sad and profound. enjoyed reading. Harry
Rhinem Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Ps. ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening, 'Precious Courtney Dyer,'" Bye Dear!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Smile ~ "O'," I knew an oasis once; tucked away amid the recesses along the Northern California coast....Well, they thought that they were within an oasis? Smile, yet, their so called castle, came up for inspections one day and, a revamping and remodeling became The Order...."From Darkened Grim to 'Brilliant Bright;' A True Fairytales, 'Once Upon A Time;' Love Always," John!:) ~
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