Under a Watchful Sky

A weary sky settles low on a bed of soft sand, eyes closing, and drifts in dreams of agile hands – hands birthed from crystal clouds, rising and falling like a breath calling, haunting from the ages, beating aloud like the pulse of man’s muse – sculpting, painting, inventing an artist’s sanctuary. A sparkling sky witnesses, with eyes wide, beauty and imagination birthed from inspired minds, and wakes from dreams of agile hands creating an original portrait, a unique expression. With a wink from the eccentric and offbeat clouds, a communal museum, comes to life - a labor of love shrouded by sky on a bed of soft sand. for Roy Jerden's East Jesus Poetry Contest, 12/15/14
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Smith Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 12:14 PM
Rhonda, this is truly a stunning piece..One the reader not only vividly sees, but feels.. Magnificent, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Parker Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 5:20 PM
there comes a moment when reading someones poetry I can feel if they're a poet or a writer..you my poetic friend are a poet...good luck in your contest, it should do very well
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December 15, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Loved the imagery you used. Almost like a meditation poem. Very peaceful and relaxing scenes.
Meade Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Wow, I found myself laying on the sand looking at the sky and watching the dancing clouds come alive! Enchanting and uplifting my dear friend. 7
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