Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Under a Maple Tree

by Michael J Falotico

                                                   Standing under a maple tree..
                                                     A rain drop lands on a leaf..
                                               All emotions erupt from this place..
                                                 A tear drop rolls down my face..
                                       The water runs down and falls from the tree..
                                         My eyes are blurred as the tear drops free..
                                       The rain drop is lost and dissolved on the land..
                                       My tear is caught and held in your caring hand..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 29, 2011 at 12:32 PM the sweetest picture u painted with these elegant words Michael.. so nice to have someone so loving caress your tears.. we both share that joy now..in our lives.. super emotional and touching piece my W.K. as your Jersey Girl is a tanned mammer jammer on this beach luv.. Michael J. Falotico May 29, 2011 at 4:11 PM Thank you Sweetheart , Jersey Beach Girl.....I had all these words in my head all week but had no time to write them down lol... with love to you Michael

Faizah Spence May 28, 2011 at 6:29 PM I enjoyed this poem it is beautiful. "My tear is caught and held in your caring hand", nice. ~Beloved Faizah Michael J. Falotico May 29, 2011 at 6:15 AM I love when one line is embraced by a fellow Poet... I actually wrote the poem around that line.... thank you for all your sweet comments....luv Michael

Constance La France May 28, 2011 at 5:08 PM This poem is just breathtaking especially that last line, wonderful and your new contest, A Table for Four, is so inspiring, I am starting to work on my poem this weekend, just for you~~ Michael J. Falotico May 28, 2011 at 5:47 PM Thank you Constance for always having a kind word for me.... Thought you may like this contest... we did have a pretend cup of coffee, so a pretend dinner would be nice too..lol. Have fun my sweet friend and best of luck to you....luv Michael

Wilma Neels May 28, 2011 at 11:48 AM Michael I loved how you combined the rain drops with your tears.. Beautiful as always, love Wilma Michael J. Falotico May 28, 2011 at 5:49 PM You knoow I love playing with words my dear friend from across the that big swimming pool...your missed love Michael

Crystal Wilkins May 28, 2011 at 9:12 AM Brilliant write! full of emotion i especially loved the line "all emotions erupt from this place" It is such a beautiful line. Thank you for your comment much appreciate it :) Keep up the brilliant work! Michael J. Falotico May 28, 2011 at 9:28 AM I am so glad you have enjoyed my poem today... we all have places that bring out the emotions that erupt... Thank you Crystal....luv Michael

Dawn Mclaughlin May 28, 2011 at 8:57 AM Simply Divine, Thank you for your Lovely comment on the tide of love Smiles :@) Dawn Mclaughlin May 28, 2011 at 9:01 AM Aw that's Lovely smiling at you :) Michael J. Falotico May 28, 2011 at 8:59 AM No need for thank you's, it's always a pleasure to read your work that comes from your heart... Michael

Delysia Hendricks May 28, 2011 at 8:10 AM Exquisite writing, Michael. You have me covered in goosebumps here. :) Michael J. Falotico May 28, 2011 at 8:19 AM It's nice to know I can bring goosebumps from my words... Usally a hug takes car of those lol... Thank you for your inspiring words.....luv Michael

Helen Forber May 28, 2011 at 7:56 AM Beautifully in-depth, honest and open. Enjoyed you poem Michael. Michael J. Falotico May 28, 2011 at 8:10 AM Thank you Helen, your comment made me smile and happy...