Undefeated

To defeat me, an emotion he created. I rose above it undeterred and elated. Then, he declared me cold and hard- hearted. Yet in my strength I felt just as charted.

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Soibam Pramodini Devi

Date: 10/17/2024 4:58:00 AM

If he is defeated by emotion he might be unable to save lives/lives depending on him .......

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/28/2024 5:39:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.