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I'm never satisfied with my decisions in life. I don't understand why all the struggle and strife. All seems good from the outside looking in, But no one knows my life, they can't judge my sin. The pain is bitter, but oh so sweet. They say life is a miracle, Some kind of treat. Through their eyes, maybe. But not through mine. I know that I'm strong, And that I'll be fine. That still does not stop the pain, It grows inside, And worsens with rain . High expectations from everyone around, I think I'd be better dead in the ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2012 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Madison. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2012 5:14:00 AM
You have so much pain maddie. You can see it in your writing and i can see it when i see you. Hang wit me! And this is a great wirte.
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Date: 3/14/2012 11:46:00 PM
very dark, i like it. welcome to soup poetry hope to seeing you write legendary poetry here. All the best RONNY
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Date: 3/14/2012 7:34:00 AM
Good morning ;-) madison , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:01:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Madison. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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