Undaunted Flight

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Pry me essence
Of honey dew melon
Fat back gimme
Mo collard greens
Gimme essence from 
Flavas undone
Marmalade too
Of long ivory tusks
That elephants do
From the flight 
Of the whip poor will 
Till
The next rains flood 
Those plains
Talking bout old essence
Encountered
From far and near
Yet never here
To the dried up bones
That bake in the in the Sahara sun
As the mighty Mississippi 
Giving life to everyone 
Visions from the native 
Child tears from fear
And unrest 
While there forefathers 
Laugh and cry then 
Turn over in their graves 
As  the millions 
man woman child 
Hordes 
March on on and on
Undaunted and forever ..
Wounded

















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                                                      A.camacho jr.
                                                       1996-2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/21/2015 8:32:00 AM
Tony, this is a brilliant write. Truly enjoyed. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 3/20/2015 6:04:00 PM
Tonyocaa, Congratulations on your awesome win........ Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:38:00 PM
Thanks Linda,nice to hear from you,Greatly appreciated..Tocaa
Date: 3/19/2015 6:15:00 PM
Tonytocaa, congratulations on your high marks in my contest - 3rd place! Verlena
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Date: 3/19/2015 6:45:00 PM
Verlena,thank you so much,for your consideration,this poem lends itself to Open mic and my favorite type of poetry,even if I didn't place..it was an honor to be in your Contest..palante..Tocaa
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