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Hateful lies-Hiding behind them Deciet and sneaky tricks But I can see through it Unveil the mask There's no fooling me you tried-I cracked the code

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2010 10:41:00 AM
Nicely done. I Like it.
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Date: 3/11/2010 11:46:00 AM
Its ok but I know you can do much better than this Brittany!
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Date: 3/9/2010 9:15:00 AM
well brittany as usual another great piece i love how you can say so much with just a few simple words, that is a true talent, and very great last line! Jo
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:28:00 PM
Excellent! Susan
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:59:00 AM
very nice liked it any other new ones too
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:52:00 AM
beautifully written i really enjoyed the first line, 'Hateful lies-Hiding behind them' you are so right, people are afraid that others might see and know the real us and we are terrified about it. i guess we just need to stop doubting outselves and let the true us shine
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:13:00 AM
Love this poem, so cute= D<3 Emily
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:31:00 AM
I love this (:
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:29:00 AM
cute, enjoyed reading today.
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