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Uncovered

Hateful lies-Hiding behind them
Deciet and sneaky tricks
But I can see through it
Unveil the mask
There's no fooling me
you tried-I cracked the code

lifelost lovefree verse

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Ralph Taylor

March 18, 2010 at 10:41 AM

Nicely done. I Like it.

Jay Smith

March 11, 2010 at 11:46 AM

Its ok but I know you can do much better than this Brittany!

Joanna Smith

March 9, 2010 at 9:15 AM

well brittany as usual another great piece i love how you can say so much with just a few simple words, that is a true talent, and very great last line! Jo

Susan Palli

March 8, 2010 at 11:28 PM

Excellent! Susan

Niall Greene

March 8, 2010 at 11:59 AM

very nice liked it any other new ones too

Gabrielle Clemens

March 8, 2010 at 11:52 AM

beautifully written i really enjoyed the first line, 'Hateful lies-Hiding behind them' you are so right, people are afraid that others might see and know the real us and we are terrified about it. i guess we just need to stop doubting outselves and let the true us shine