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UNCONSCIOUS BIAS MIDST TRUTH

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August 27, 2024

   
Contest Name This or That, Vol 27
Sponsor Edward Ibeh
   

 

Midst unconscious bias along fulfillment height Against scarcity feelings of carnality’s pest Brought by low self-esteem, attacking virtuous best I claim triumph of spirituality-delight. Praise-propelled as recipient of God’s precious grace* I'm gripped with serene eternal salvation’s bliss Though egoistic opinions show mocking hiss My heart is grateful for blessings through all the days. Unconscious bias makes me admit what I need It’s to share with others love that makes them complete Midst kindness and care, selflessness can’t deplete Vanquishing vain jealousy, likewise grievous greed. Truth freely reinforces reality-seal Against flaws of bias, though unconsciously done Always earnest while honesty is surely won Living gladly with others in reaching-out zeal.
*Ephesians 2:8 For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God. August 27, 2024 2nd place, "This or That, Vol 27" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 9/27/2024

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Date: 9/27/2024 6:59:00 AM
As always, a beautifully written poem from you, Beata. Thoroughly enjoyed. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 8/27/2024 7:20:00 PM
I hope you do well in this contest.
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Date: 8/27/2024 5:13:00 AM
I love your poem. I can really feel God soaking through your words.
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