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Unconditional Surrender To Love

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Liquescent sunset fades away, From the calm ocean horizon; Slow ease, moving, Mingling hues of scarlet, Coral mood of twilight. Immerse in the serene ocean music, Waves begin to creep within reach; Graceful pull, backs away, To its labyrinth fathoms depth. The air, I inhale deep, Lost in briny cool breeze. My passionate heartbeat Consumes in its quintessence Of the unfeigned world, My simple lullaby. Seagulls sailing by Settling down for the night. Alone, just my beloved and me, Sit on a blanket, spread out Over the grain of sand, nuzzling close. A picnic, under the nascent twilight heaven. Candles flicker blue-red flames, Stimulating sparks, from the gentle stroke Rolling off the ocean breeze. A basket of fresh fruits, aged cheese, Two crystal glasses Filled with champagne as love beckons. A fleeting glance into colorfulness night; For our ardent passion flowers Our unconditional surrender. 3/30/2020

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Date: 1/29/2021 8:14:00 AM
So romantic ~ Beautiful imagery, Eve
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Date: 4/1/2020 11:16:00 AM
My wordsmith friend, you have had so much fun with words in this romantic poem! I can almost hear the pulsing rhythm of the waves! Congratulations Eve on your first place win!
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Date: 4/1/2020 5:20:00 AM
"Liquescent sunset fades away, From the calm ocean horizon;" Eloquent are the lines in your poem with such beauty in your imagery. Congratulation Eve, on a most deserved win. JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/31/2020 2:38:00 PM
Simple lullabyies still work.
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Date: 3/31/2020 1:10:00 PM
Lovely imagery in the first stanza and choice of words... So beautifully expressed..
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Date: 3/31/2020 9:20:00 AM
I love the imagery. You are very talented and observant Eve. Blessings and hugs.
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