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Unconditional Surrender To Love

Liquescent sunset fades away, From the calm ocean horizon; Slow ease, moving, Mingling hues of scarlet, Coral mood of twilight. Immerse in the serene ocean music, Waves begin to creep within reach; Graceful pull, backs away, To its labyrinth fathoms depth. The air, I inhale deep, Lost in briny cool breeze. My passionate heartbeat Consumes in its quintessence Of the unfeigned world, My simple lullaby. Seagulls sailing by Settling down for the night. Alone, just my beloved and me, Sit on a blanket, spread out Over the grain of sand, nuzzling close. A picnic, under the nascent twilight heaven. Candles flicker blue-red flames, Stimulating sparks, from the gentle stroke Rolling off the ocean breeze. A basket of fresh fruits, aged cheese, Two crystal glasses Filled with champagne as love beckons. A fleeting glance into colorfulness night; For our ardent passion flowers Our unconditional surrender. 3/30/2020
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Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 8:14 AM
So romantic ~ Beautiful imagery, Eve
Kauffman Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 11:16 AM
My wordsmith friend, you have had so much fun with words in this romantic poem! I can almost hear the pulsing rhythm of the waves! Congratulations Eve on your first place win!
Hawkens Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 5:20 AM
"Liquescent sunset fades away, From the calm ocean horizon;" Eloquent are the lines in your poem with such beauty in your imagery. Congratulation Eve, on a most deserved win. JC Hawkens
Gaul Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Simple lullabyies still work.
One Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 1:10 PM
Lovely imagery in the first stanza and choice of words... So beautifully expressed..
Lamoureux Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 9:20 AM
I love the imagery. You are very talented and observant Eve. Blessings and hugs.
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