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" EROS' FIELDS OF LOVE " MY PHOTO, ©

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Her angelic face, Her tender voice, Her sweet words, Along with: Her smiles, Her caresses And Her kisses, Masterfully, Succeeded in weaving, the web of love That Entangled his, helpless, enchanted heart Which In a trance of bliss, unconditionally, surrendered To Eros' demands! © Demetrios Trifiatis 23 April 2019

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Date: 7/11/2019 9:19:00 AM
This could not be expressed more eloquently.
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Date: 4/26/2019 5:50:00 PM
A new "fav", Demetrios; thanks!
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Date: 4/23/2019 9:14:00 AM
A beautiful and romantic poem dearest Demetrios. I think we all needed this today. Thank you....Maria xxx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2019 11:22:00 AM
How wonderful to have friends like yourself dearest, Maria! Your comment is an uplifting one since I agree with you after My "Sri Lanka Blasts" poem! God bless you!
Date: 4/23/2019 7:14:00 AM
Those colors are awesome..a joy to start the day. A lovely romantic write to go with the pretty flowers.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2019 11:17:00 AM
Thank you dear , Vijay for your gracious visit and comment!
Date: 4/23/2019 5:38:00 AM
Helpless...such is the power of LOVE
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2019 5:43:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/23/2019 4:27:00 AM
Love is so powerful Demetrios, even the strongest of men can weaken at the knees. Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/23/2019 4:15:00 PM
Lol, not only are you wise Demetrios but a true romantic as well
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2019 4:48:00 AM
This I know my friend, Tom! A comment on my poem I do not see! Lol! Haha!
Date: 4/23/2019 2:26:00 AM
Such exquisitely romantic words dear Demetrios that have lifted my spirit on this spring morn and outside on my balcony the tiniest finch is serenading me with his sweet song - beautiful way to start the day! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet comment my dearest, Ann! I am happy that my little poem has made your day! God bless!

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