Jack Horne Poet Verse

Unconditional Love

Unconditional Love By Jack Horne and Beth Winchcombe 

 

We’ve been through this a thousand times!

What can I say to make you see?

The love I felt for you has died -

I’m sorry, you’re not right for me.

 

You made me laugh!

You made me cry!

Now it seems you’ve gone away!

I should hate you,

BUT,

Love and hate are much akin.

 

I know you want another chance,

But feel we’ve had that one last try!

I never meant to break your heart.

It tears me up to see you cry.

  

I’m missing you so much

Already,

You heartless swine!

Leaving me alone!

Why did you come into my life

If you didn’t mean to stay?

 

Unless I owned a crystal ball,

How could I know how it would end?

I love you still - but not enough!

I know your broken heart will mend.

 

What I felt for you

Is liken to a tap

I just can't turn it off.

You're nothing but a whimp,

A bastard,

A womaniser,

Someone I should hate!

Can't you see what you've done to me?

I wish now that we'd never met!

Sadly though I'd still forgive you.

 

I've got myself a dog, he won't let me down!

Unconditional love, that's what I need right now!

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Kim Merryman January 29, 2012 at 2:58 PM Congrats on your win, Jack. Enjoyed your collaboration. Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 28, 2012 at 8:55 AM wow wow Jack congrats on a super second place win .. excellent my friend.. always awesome..

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2012 at 7:50 PM I sure remember this one. You did really great with your partner, jack. Big Congrats to the both of you.

Debbie Guzzi January 27, 2012 at 6:59 PM yes how can we ever know how long anything will last,,still we must have hope,nice win! Congrad's Light & Love

Jon Arno January 27, 2012 at 6:14 PM Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon

David Williams January 27, 2012 at 8:27 AM Jack and Beth congrats on your win, I like the format and construction of it, but is it fiction?..David

Carol Eastman January 27, 2012 at 8:15 AM Fabulous show of your passions and feelings in this situation... Congratulations on the win... The results of a broken relationship couldn't have been said better.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 27, 2012 at 7:02 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Jack. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 27, 2012 at 6:00 AM Congratulations to you both!! Love the poem!! Tis true, a dog will never let you down. Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A January 27, 2012 at 12:58 AM JACK, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2012 at 11:57 AM Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Jack. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

Carol Eastman January 16, 2012 at 11:35 AM Very imaginative and heart felt write. Great collaboration.

Bl Devnath January 16, 2012 at 9:44 AM Appealing with heart, wonderful write, thanks, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 16, 2012 at 4:38 AM Very good well done to the both of you x

Robert Pettit January 15, 2012 at 8:59 PM You made a good team with this write. This is admirable.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 15, 2012 at 8:40 PM lovely collab Jack.. awesome lines of poetic art my friend... good luck..

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2012 at 7:27 PM oh, the woes of it all, and she is right to get a dog. haha. this was a cute idea between you two. I enjoyed it. Luv, Andrea

M.I.A . January 15, 2012 at 6:46 PM Bravo! both of you has made a heartfelt yet strangely humorously appealing with this piece. 'You heartless swine!' LoL, would love to be able to say that too =D