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Unconditional Love

a hot day, white light
lime green leaves and roses gleam
in the starlight phase

scintillating sun
with its fierce glare everywhere
except long shadows

captives of white heat
as sun shows its true colors
midst adoring blooms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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DiMino Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 4:31 PM
You have such a lovely way of capturing the beauty of a moment. Lovely imagery! Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 4:42 PM
Your remarks are the highest compliment. Thank you so much, Joe. Blessings. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 1:35 AM
An Indian summer? We are having fine weather too, but if the weather forecast is right, we will have rain at the weekend.
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:32 AM
Our warm days will end this weekend, too. But, it's nice while it lasts! :D
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 6:30 PM
Oh, today, the sunrays felt so good on my back; being baptist by it's warmth. Blessings my friend
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 7:21 PM
Our weather here is unseasonably warm. It'll be 75 degrees tomorrow. A real treat! Blessings and hugs
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