Get Your Premium Membership

Unconditional

It was a cold December night when we finally met in the flesh . Our souls however had always been intertwined. When we look at each other in the eyes, we see a reflection of one another, distorted versions of ourselves perhaps. So different but so alike We bicker like sisters, but as most mothers do, you heal me with your words and witty metaphors. To be continued …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/1/2023 11:14:00 PM
NICELY DONE! Sound like someone possibly found their soulmate! Wonderful written poem! Can't wait till part 2. Thank you for sharing! Keep up the great work of art!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/30/2023 3:07:00 PM
First On line date, next a sister, then A mother figure. Can't wait for the conclusion.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2023 9:20:00 AM
Not mentioning why these two are where they are adds a bit of irony to the poem. I like that. Thanks for sharing................peace!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things