Dakarai Cobb Poet Italian Sonnet

Uncompromising

Understanding what kind of man
Never allows himself to lose
Control of his very own views
Or change his very own game plan,
Manage your life so that you can
Possess control of your own news,
Regardless of if others bruise
Or refuse to become your fan.
Make the best decisions for you,
In a way that puts you on top.
Stop thinking about what they do!
Instead, move forward with no stops!
Notice the goals within your view!
Go, and take harvest of your crops!

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Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2011 at 7:17 PM wow,you are king of those acrostic type italian sonnets for sure!! Keep it up, Dakarai! Dakarai Cobb May 11, 2011 at 9:20 AM thank you for that compliment Andrea. All that I am trying to do is challenge myself to become a better writer. At some point, I would love to do this for a living. So, I have to keep coming up with ideas that would make people want to read me.

Nette Onclaud May 10, 2011 at 10:46 AM ooops, you;re the sponsor. lol... i am still doing mine for you.. :)

Nette Onclaud May 10, 2011 at 10:44 AM great sense of "breathing" in this piece, dak! best winning wishes..:) huggs, nette

Dakarai Cobb May 10, 2011 at 7:52 AM I am looking forward to reading the acrostic, italian sonnets that were entered in my contest. Thank you all for making my first contest experience an enjoyable one. Take care Poetry Soup.