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Uncompensated Loss

UNCOMPENSATED LOSS I am crying because I dropped the posy down a storm drain, gone forever ‘Precious gem of a lover.’ It was the first gift from my love Rosy. Soft shy tongue could not voice her feelings. I boldly approached to propose She hesitated to come close. Only the posy was her offerings. I was charmed, honored but failed to preserve the gift of her suppressed pleasure, my most valuable treasure. Now stormy rainy night just to observe. 03/07/19 Third Place 'Down a storm drain, gone forever' Contest by Eve Roper

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Date: 3/22/2019 4:36:00 PM
Anisha, thank you for entering my contest. You had clear and fascinating imagery and great rhythm and flow..Congratulations on your 3rd place win. . Come and visit me on my blog https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=35331&PoetID=57242
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Date: 3/22/2019 10:01:00 PM
Sure. Thanks n Regards

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