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Uncomfortable

we forget that were
more comfortable pretending 
we cant see in the dark
sometimes we bring our flashlights
but we always know exactly where to shine them first
so i advert my eyes as
my hostage pretends to be surprised
i should just be myself

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 8:19:00 AM
WELL DONE! THE SOUND OF THIS WRITE IS COOL, JUST BE YOURSELF. -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:38:00 AM
Great write that I could go several different ways in the interpertation...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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