Uncolor

this world is bleak,
everywhere i look is the same
dark and dreary black
and plain boring white

oh how i would miss 
those clear days, that i could ook into the sky
and see for miles and miles
now all the sky is ugly dull and boring

and the color of a red delicious, juciy apple,
all i see i see is a black blob of nothing

but most of all, all the bright different 
flourescent colors of my favorite t-shirt

how dull the world would be
not to see the beauty of someone's eyes.
no baby blues, big browns, or jadey greens
just dull, boring, white, black, and grey.

a bleak world is a boring world.
without color, everything looks the same
everywhere looks the same

no diversity,
no ethnic difference

look at those two people,
are they different?
yes. but you can't see it

this world is bleak

but the thing i would miss the most,
the thing that makes everyone feel good
after the most devestating of times
a rainbow. its colors are what  makes this world, 
sparkle glisten, and shine
after a storm

i think that i shall never see,
something as beautiful as a rainbow.

belak, everywhere i  looks is the same.
this world is bleak
all the colors gone like the wind
on a breezy day.

all i see is dark, dreary, black
and plain, boring, white.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/7/2010 4:32:00 AM
I love your word usage in this beautiful write....with love Michael
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Date: 11/24/2010 6:22:00 PM
Hello.Lizz :-) I like that plain boring white line! wow to that big blob of nothing,, yes i know the feeling. Life and its uncolor ways.. You have a nice way of setting the image right for your age.. very talented write, Enjoyed your poem, and have a wonderful blessed Thanksgiving day,. always,..Miss P.D.
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