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sunshine and southwind finally off couch duty i’ve dovetailed enough 8/20/2020

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Date: 8/22/2020 6:52:00 AM
Yep, time for us all to stop being sheep. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 9:26:00 AM
True!
Date: 8/22/2020 3:36:00 AM
Too much couch duty sucks. Great senryu Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 9:26:00 AM
True!
Date: 8/22/2020 1:08:00 AM
I salute your profound wit dear Kim. so refreshing!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 8/21/2020 5:52:00 AM
Gold Star Poet you are Truly unique, Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 8/20/2020 10:35:00 PM
So you need to unwind, Well this poetry is the perfect start..Love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 5:15:00 AM
Thank you, Harry, and for being supportive too!
Date: 8/20/2020 5:09:00 PM
The title dovetails so well with your third line. (Congratulating myself here for finally 'nailing a comment.') ~ Narcissus
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:40:00 PM
LOL...Narcissus patting himself on his own shoulder. Now what do you think this poem is talking about? hint...2 weeks.
Date: 8/20/2020 3:57:00 PM
This is hilarious; for it means ME this week. Except for me it is a lazy-boy or ha ha Lazy-Girl.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! I love my la-z-boy!
Date: 8/20/2020 3:25:00 PM
Awesome, Kim. YOu have wit!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!

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