Unclenched

sunshine and southwind
finally off couch duty
i’ve dovetailed enough

8/20/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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DiMino Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Yep, time for us all to stop being sheep. Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 9:26 AM
True!
Koplin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Too much couch duty sucks. Great senryu Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 9:26 AM
True!
Brul Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:08 AM
I salute your profound wit dear Kim. so refreshing!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Romios Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 5:52 AM
Gold Star Poet you are Truly unique, Pangie xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 5:57 AM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Horsman Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 10:35 PM
So you need to unwind, Well this poetry is the perfect start..Love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 5:15 AM
Thank you, Harry, and for being supportive too!
Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:09 PM
The title dovetails so well with your third line. (Congratulating myself here for finally 'nailing a comment.') ~ Narcissus
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 6:40 PM
LOL...Narcissus patting himself on his own shoulder. Now what do you think this poem is talking about? hint...2 weeks.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 3:57 PM
This is hilarious; for it means ME this week. Except for me it is a lazy-boy or ha ha Lazy-Girl.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Thank you, Caren! I love my la-z-boy!
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Awesome, Kim. YOu have wit!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
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