Uncle Joe

Uncle Joe spends his days on death row, for killing his best friend and Aunt Flo. He found them in bed, then filled them with lead. Losing a friend hurts, don't you know? 3/28/20

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/7/2020 12:57:00 AM

I think you’ve changed the names to protect the guilty ;). Nice one!

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/7/2020 6:49:00 PM

Thank you P.S.! Have a wonderful evening!

Mark Toney

Date: 3/31/2020 9:09:00 PM

Nice write, Wren. Love the last line. This reminds me of “Hey Joe” by Jimi Hendrix. Stay safe. ~Mark

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/1/2020 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Mark! Hope you're doing well my friend!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/30/2020 7:44:00 PM

G'day Wren … always pays to keep an eye on the ones closest to you. I think your limerick's topic happens quite often. Still, it made me giggle indeed - thank you Wren - Lindsay

Wren Rushing
Date: 3/31/2020 6:05:00 PM

Thank you Lindsay! Hope you're doing well my friend!