Uncivil War by Jim Barlow

Leaves flap in the breeze 
From the tops of the trees 
’Round the battlefield that 
Rests just below. 

Hand to hand 
Sun to sun 
We pass on the notion 
That civility in war has never been done. 

Brothers in arms, 
Brothers in harm. 
Slaves to graves, 
Anger in waves. 

People in chains, 
Brandishing pains. 
Blue versus Gray, 
As families pray. 

Hand in hand 
Gun to gun
We retain the notion 
That civility in war has never been done. 

Blue takes Gray 
North wins the day 
Gun is aimed 
A President claimed. 

“Death to tyrants” 
Words of violence 
A man of flaws 
Brought down by law. 

Man to man 
Son to son 
We re-teach the notion 
That civility in war has never been done. 

A nation cry 
A last train ride 
Put out the fires. 
Rebuild the spires.

What God hath blessed 
Man has messed 
Men finally freed 
Lessons learned, time to heed. 

Flags fly in the breeze 
Surrounded by trees 
With a thousand 
White crosses below. 

Man to man 
One by one 
May we learn the lesson, 
That no war has ever, truly, been won.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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November 8, 2024 at 9:33 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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