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Uncircumnavigated

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"Uncircumnavigated" Just Around the Corner ... How did you write your way into my story? A Wolf and a Fox Blitzkrieg. The rompers romp in… This is unprecedented, unwanted, Silence is Golden I walk to the beach and back breathless cool you; me, debating always debating internal within the uncircumnavigated tracks, feral white rabbit marks his mark Clocks His time in Time the city skyline, recalcitrant, shading, delicious Light in Dark Night winks back ridiculously knowing winks back How did you write your way into my story? When I had already written keys and locks into the Chinese Puzzle Box locked locked locked and then, unheralded inconsequential YOU bourgeois gauche calculating intellect breeze in… Hornet bites honey bee Gold dribbling (LadyLabyrinth/ 2019) "When" / Elysian Fields

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Robert Lindley

Date: 11/20/2019 8:11:00 PM

Truly astounding creativity and depths of thought in this wondrous nee piece my friend. May your wonderful pen forever bleed its very gifted ink! A fav, a true pleasure to read such poetry.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/20/2019 9:19:00 PM

Strange thoughts abound in the early hours of the morning in my addled brain. In truth, I am not that gifted, more than likely fuelled by madness. No, not gifted compared to your refined intellect and intelligent writing Lindley. Thank you. I shall attempt to read your body of work this weekend dedicated to Nabokov and Pushkin. x

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/20/2019 7:13:00 PM

I had no idea where this was going, for it had so many wonderful leaps and jumps! "How did you write your way into my story?" - I like this very much!

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/20/2019 9:23:00 PM

Out of all the Mothers, I knew you would like this. Thanks Mme. Krutsinger and disregard the Loon below. I think of 'em as i go my merry way...down the Rabbit Hole. Regards, Alice.