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                   June 23, 2025, entered in Brian Strand's Contest 1392

            April 9, 2026, entered in Seth Pina's Romanticism Poetry Contest

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Unchanging Charms

"The night is young. Baby, so are we" is from "Shadows in the Moonlight"
by singer Anne Murry.




On their fifth anniversary,
the couple had a unique night.           
They dined by candlelight and then
went ballroom dancing—a delight!

“The night is young and so are we.
You want to take a walk?” he said.
They strolled by many darkened homes.
It seemed most neighbors were in bed.

They passed an older couple’s home,
where shades were closed but light shone through,
revealing waltzing silhouettes.
They gazed at the inspiring view.    

A night like this seems magical
for those who spend it in the arms
of those they love, for they have found
their partners have unchanging charms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rolland Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 10:18 AM
so touching poem, janice, reading is enjoyable yan
Canerdy Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Thanks so much, Yann. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Love this! Makes me think of old Hollywood magic.
Canerdy Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
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