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Unburden

Unburden my life of desolation the weight on my shoulders too heavy. Can somebody please lighten my load I am clearly needy and ready. All my life never asked a soul To really help me out I got by inch by inch by being gracious with no shout There is a point when somebody breaks no human is made of steel. I've held in all my pain More years than i can heal when will there be a chapter in this play i've been That doesn't involve massive damage Where i can just sit and grin. I cant wait any longer My life that was taken away need to begin. kristen bruni

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/10/2016 2:16:00 AM
Kristen Bruni,, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**
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Date: 8/25/2015 11:28:00 PM
Kristen, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2014 1:07:00 PM
Very nice expressed poem Kristen! Cheers!xxx D.
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent piece! Kika
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Date: 9/3/2014 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! Well-deserved for this excellent piece! Pandita
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