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UNBROKEN LINES

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sheets of onion-skin parchment absorbed spilled ink like wounds— each stanza a fractured bone set crooked by unpracticed hands. the poet’s quill snapped mid-confession: a silent scream bled into margins.
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Maverick Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:04 PM
In all consideration.? Its allways Good the have a read between the Lines Sara.'
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:36 PM
I agree
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 1:41 PM
good look at what's found in between the lines ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:37 PM
thank you!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 9:12 AM
each stanza a fractured bone set crooked by unpracticed hands…
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:37 PM
thanks, Kim, hugs, Sara
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