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Outlined by moonlight, mysterious Orb spider, spinning your geometric lines, un-changed, as from the dawn of time. Around us, as life quickens-you -un-hurried-weave your web as–slowly knitting time. Second by second, secretly in spaces, you hang your timeless filaments. In daylight nature wraps you in a leaf- this ritual- unchanging as the tide Unaware by day we sweep this gossamer away When patiently re-strung-like space and time re-spun we watch you, and for a moment time stands still. 5/30/21 ~ Third Place ~ Premiere Contest: Open Poetry 5 Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

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Timothy Ray

Date: 5/4/2022 7:44:00 PM

ahhh the beauty in nature we tend to miss...not poets tho...i admire their work in the web as you well capture...lovely capturing dew and become diamonds hanging in the air....it is all magical isn't it my friend and blessed we are how poets capture what the crowd walks on by...congratulations

Jai Bankson

Date: 8/22/2021 6:40:00 PM

Damnt woman.I love this along with all of them.Had to drop by after a few years.hope all is well

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 6/14/2021 11:52:00 AM

So much to learn from the spiders about patience, perseverance and hard work!! What a superbly written poem Suzanne! I enjoyed reading it thrice to understand it! I also learned a new word 'gossamer'.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/8/2021 1:41:00 AM

Such a beautiful write. I enjoyed this so much. Congrats on your win and God bless you, Love, Gina

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/8/2021 2:12:00 AM

I really appreciate your valued comment. Have a wonderful day. Best, SuZ

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/7/2021 7:09:00 PM

Dear Suzanne, your poem is exquisite. I was captivated by the amazing weave of your lush imagery. I was enthralled by the concept of the spider "slowly knitting time" and "time re-spun" - simply ingenious! Your gifted pen spills with reverent appreciation for Nature's beauty. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/8/2021 2:11:00 AM

Hi Susan: It was a real boost to find your wonderful comment. So validating to read. Many thanks, SuZ

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/6/2021 8:30:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/8/2021 2:08:00 AM

Thanks Beata: Your visit means a lot. Blessings, SuZ

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/6/2021 6:55:00 AM

Well-Knit. Congratulations!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/6/2021 1:19:00 PM

Hi Christuraj: Thanks for reading and leaving this fun comment. SuZ

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/6/2021 4:20:00 AM

time stands still indeed reading this.:) a lovely little 'snapshot' poem, simple yet so effective, well worded - congrats on your win in my contest!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/6/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Charlotte: A lovely surprise tor this Sunday. Hugs, SuZ

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/6/2021 4:15:00 AM

A beautiful portrayal of spider web. Congratulations

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/6/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thanks Rama: I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Best, SuZ

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/31/2021 5:22:00 AM

Unfathomed is nature's wisdom, dearest Suzanne. Your inspiring writing, unmistakably, displays nature's grandeur! Excellent writing. Hugs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/31/2021 5:41:00 AM

Hi Demetrios :Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your valued comment. Best, SuZ

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/30/2021 8:46:00 AM

This is a FAVE for me. Love how you treated the theme of time here, Suzanne.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/30/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thanks so much, Line….for reminding me about this poem. When we had Jilliby Farm I was fascinated with all the spider forms around. I wrote a lot of spider poems then, and some I need to look at again and post them.here. Cheers, SuZ

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2021 8:43:00 AM

proteinaceous silk adorned in silvery dew ~ arachnid artwork. They never cease to amaze me, I love to watch them in the autumn when their webs are covered in dew. Tom

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/30/2021 8:54:00 AM

Tom: Glad you enjoyed….I found out an interesting fact when I was wondering how they produced all that silk. They eat the damaged web and spin it back. That’s recycling. SuZ

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/30/2021 8:30:00 AM

Interesting, thought-provoking, excellent poem about a spider's web, Suzanne. Most people don't even take time to notice their intricacies, just sweep them away. Nice work.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/30/2021 8:58:00 AM

Thanks, L Milton: I have noticed that most poets take the time to notice…..read Robert Frost’s ‘Design’ It’s brilliant. https://spdbv.vital-it.ch/TheMolecularLevel/WelRed/Frost01.pdf SuZ