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Unbroken Chain of Love

Was there ever a time she doubted my love? As a child, did I let her know how much her acts of kindness meant? No one will ever love me as she did. Decades have passed, but my heart still yearns for her touch. Ageless is the affection for the mother who lives in my heart. *Written March 15, 2015, in honor of my mother who passed far too young in 1984.

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Al Juman

Date: 6/16/2018 2:08:00 PM

This is beautiful sweetheart

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/22/2016 12:23:00 PM

"Ageless is the affection for the mother who lives in my heart? The beauty of Mother's love and affection is that it grows more and deeper with the passing of time. You have painted a touching write. Congrats dear friend on your well deserving win. Sorry for visiting your page after a long span of time, but you always live in my memory as a wonderful friend even to this day. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/12/2015 7:17:00 PM

Again belated congratulations on your win. Again a fantastic write. Very touching and meaningful!

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/12/2015 9:41:00 AM

Sorry I'm late on this Carolyn. Congrats on your win. Thank you for entering my contest.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/6/2015 12:26:00 PM

Beautiful, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 4/5/2015 9:25:00 PM

Beautiful tribute to your mom Carolyn...congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2015 9:17:00 PM

wonderful, Carolyn.Congrats on the win.

James Horn

Date: 3/19/2015 6:44:00 AM

https://VIMEO.com/25559229 So listen to this and think of your precious mother Wanda. Jim Horn

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/17/2015 5:39:00 PM

Such a beautiful tribute to your mother, Carolyn. My heart hurts along with yours...my mom passed at age 54 many years ago. Beautifully written...GL in the contest. Sandra

Constance La France

Date: 3/17/2015 4:18:00 PM

Carolyn, this is so touching and heartbreaking, my mother also died way to young, best of luck in the contest and thanks for your comforting comment on my poem O, the pain . . .

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/17/2015 12:33:00 PM

The emotions swell up and cascade over the heart as the words lead the reader on. Emile. #7

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/16/2015 12:54:00 PM

An excellent heartfelt tribute to lovely mother on Mother's Day. Beautifully expressed. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Daver Austin

Date: 3/16/2015 10:54:00 AM

Beautifully done, Carolyn. I read this one and think the same things about my mother that you have put down so well. Love, daver

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/16/2015 8:20:00 AM

:) just touching and sweet tribute Carolyn.. :)! God bless you!..olive eloisa :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2015 6:17:00 PM

How nice to know of your mother Wanda. I knew a lovely lady with that name once too.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/17/2015 11:47:00 AM

Andrea, it is a common name for people of Polish ancestry, but I don't come across many with that name. Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2015 5:22:00 PM

awww, beautiful tribute, love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2015 2:42:00 PM

- What is greater than a mother's love - A beautiful poem Carolyn! - Happy Mother's Day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)